This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more
specific for the reader. We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food pies. We also went to look for a present a phone for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie or a soft toy. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes top dress pants hoodies, I got two new items bags shampoo brush and a pair of shoes Nike Jordan's converses. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block
trumpet,chocolate,vanilla. Lucky me!
specific for the reader. We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.
Here is an example.
In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the
trumpet,chocolate,vanilla. Lucky me!
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